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We are not afraid of fire

When we see its beauty and feel its warmth from distance.
When we watch how it moves and dances simulating to be alive.
When we hear its soft voice which sound changes
depending on what, or whom, the fire eats.


We try not to be afraid of fire

When we feed it with dead, dry things hoping that it gives us warmth in return.
When we let it stroke our food with its merciless heat to make it tastier for us.
When we let it eat our torches to light up darkness with its body.
When we use its heat to cast metal, to create merciless weapons.
When we take advantage of fire's never-ending hunger.
And its lust to destroy. Lust.


We are afraid of fire

Once we are the next one it eats.
Once it blinds our eyes.
Once it fondles our body,
and hugs us with its endless hunger,
ignoring our screams and struggles.


But we don't want to be reminded of fire's lust for others' sufferings

while we are blinded by its beauty,
and hypnotized by its movings.
While we feel save using it as a weapon,
and as our God to entrust to our families, friends, and our lives.


While we talk about heaven,
we use hell's tools.
©2008-2009 *GloomyUnderwoods
:icongloomyunderwoods:

Author's Comments

Always wanted to write what I think of fire.

I also listened to some tango music when I started writing. Helped me to come up with anything else, quickly. :XD:


Do tell me what you think, but critique is not exactly desired, because I already know that there's a hell lot of good things about fire too. Like.... cooked/baked/fried food, and... warm water in winter. ^^

Speaking of water, I was close to add THAT part in it too. Something like "The only thing to kill fire, which only will is to destroy, is to use the substance that creates life."
But unfortunately, it got cut out, because I had to use that one last sentence about God, heaven, and hell, without having to change the subject too quickly...


Now that I think about it, water is also not THAT harmless.
But anyway!


You don't drink fire to survive, do you? :)


If so...




AWESOME!

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:iconankheart:
I tried eating a fire once, it turned to ashes in my mouth. :(

Silliness aside, this is plainly awesome and I r loving it.

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Can you see the fire in their eyes?
Can you hear the anguish in their cries?
Can you feel the beauty in their arts?
Can you sense the love within their hearts?

-Ayreon 01011001
:iconscream-till-it-hurts:
You're very good with getting your messages across... I am terrified of fire myself, due to a recurring nightmare a few years ago. Of course, I'd be lost without it when it comes to winter and food :D

"While we talk about heaven,
we use hell's tools." Love that bit, it's so true :p
:iconkryz-flavored:
that is effin' awesome!
beautifully written; you send your message clearly...that last line is wonderfully stocked up with irony.
fire [and, eventually, electricity] sure have helped us become the freaks we are today...

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“Man’s inhumanity to nature makes man’s inhumanity to man almost seem justified.”
~ Murray Ball.
:iconneverfilledvoid:
This is so deep. I love it.
Very well whritten and easy to understand.
:iconfurryhugplz:

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@3@ Miiih
:iconrmz-nemesis:
This is effin' cool! :D The last sentence gave me thrills. x3

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_Mask Removed_
.Nemesis Revealed.
:icondigimitsu:
Wow you're good at art AND writing xD The last and second last verse are my favourite :3

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Help out my family? :pray:

Click to get bitten :furious:
:icongloomyunderwoods:
That's probably everything I'm good at in my whole life already. :giggle: There are thousand of things I can't do...
Thank you!

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